Peer Evaluation Feedback - Lorna Wilson

After watching the preliminary films back with the class, we received a lot of good comments as well as some useful pointers. These were that we could've quickened the pace to add more tension, and the continuity error of the ransom note and match on action when the pull door is pushed.
Good points :

• Good framing and attention to detail e.g. ransom note.
• Good choice of location.
• Appropriate soundtrack that suited the mood.
• Good performance by the actors.
  
• Good range of camera shots and movement.
  

Overall I'm pleased with the outcome of our preliminary film. Despite some of the technical hitches and errors, I've learned a lot about the making of films which I'll use for the real task.